Video Critiques

Katie – A little fast spoken

            A lot of “sprout fund” logo shots in beginning

            A little fast with the ken burns sometimes 

            Great images of people actually painting the murals

                        Awesome specific examples 

 

Patrice – Love the song!

            However, turn it down a little maybe, and raise your vocals..

            Pictures a little of focus

            A lot of the same pictures

 

Julie – awesome pictures showing the process

            Music up a little.

            Adjust audio

            And obviously video audio needs tweeking 

            

Jenna – Talking super fast

Really fast moving pictures (little choppy) 

            Good match up with some of the visual with the audio & good quotes 

            More photos of the actual decorated doors in Oakland?

  

Ariel – allowed to use that many pictures that aren’t your own?

            Less global – you know that

Good shots of inside of south side tattoo – fact you talked to guy is a good thing – shots of people getting them done, looking for what they want – good

Didn't get to hear audio with visual like it will be in the end - so can't judge that

           

Emily – no music while talking? Little grainy with the voice anyway

A little fast with the pictures.

            AWESOME title effects

            Spelled sponsored wrong  

 

Gillian – really super low audio

            What is your topic?

            I think you used interviews – which is good

            A lot of music visualizer – find other images maybe?

  

Sarah – nice drawings of cathedral for design plan

                        Good statistics

            Up on the audio – music?

            Images moving a little fast

            Good interview voice behind with video&audio

            Ending?

----colleen