Video Critiques from Sarah

Katie
Love: pictures of the murals and the history explanation about them
Improve: slow down the speed of the pictures, try to match some of the pictures to the words better, add a music soundtrack

Patrice
Love: the music and the quote were awesome
Improve: try to make the pictures clearer, slow down your pictures, balance out the sound

Colleen
Love: the transitions were awesome and your photos were cool
Improve: possibly slow down the transitions, balance the sound a bit better

Julie
Love: awesome pictures
Improve: possibly show more variety of art on the buses, possibly vary the transitions, I don't know if you have more pictures at the bs depot but if you do it would be neat to see more of those

Jenna
Love: the pictures you have are very cool and well framed
Improve: slow down your speech, slow down your images, add a music soundtrack

Ariel
Love:visual pictures you have are really neat
Improve: balance out the sound, slow down the pictures so we can see the art, have more pictures from pittsburgh of people getting tattoos if you have them

Emily
Love: the variety of topics you covered was so informative
Improve: try to have clearer images of the chalk art-I know it is hard to get but that would be cool, more shots in action would be really neat-but that must be hard to find, keep the music that you start with throughout the piece-just make it softer

Gill
Love: the music visualizer images were so cool
Improve: adjust the sound levels, figure out what to do with the black space between clips, have a music soundtrack

~Sarah