In-Class #17 - Gill

Katie

I love the many pictures of the murals –they’re gorgeous and the contrast against the blank wall. Your information was really cool!

Flashes through pictures very quickly – made my eyes hurt!

Show a picture of the guy you’re quoting?

Sound of your voice is very tinny

Patrice

I love how well your pictures and your words go together – very well planned.

Great shots of fountains, perhaps get more running clips?

Your voice is a tad hard to understand – the voice is tinny and the music covers you up quite a bit.

Pictures are kind of fuzzy and feel repeated.

Colleen

Great shots and transitions for your information.

Perhaps turn down the music a little – it kind of over powers you a tad.

More moving? I know it’s about still shots, but perhaps a photographer at work?

Flip through pictures a little too quickly

Julie

Awesome shots and clips of the contrasts between the many buses and how they do things.

Tell us why this is important to us as Pittsburghers.

Turn up the music a little?

You know you have to get rid of the ambient noise

Jenna

Beautiful, beautiful shots and really interesting information on doors in oakland

Good background information on doors, but what argument are you making?

Ambient noise needs to dragged down – you’re really loud and are speaking really quick!

Flip through your pictures very quickly. Slow down some! When you fix your voice, you’ll have to get rid of some time/pictures.

Ariel

Flashing through the pictures really fast.

Awesome information and excellent shots, really really cool.

Concentrate more on Pittsburgh, but you know that

You say a lot about how the history is long, but what’s the argument? What does the long history mean about how we should perceive tattoos?

Emily

Your voice sounds really tinny.

So what’s your argument, really? Why do they want to influence people?

Excellent shots of the chalk and matching it up with your words.

Your transition slides are cool, but maybe spice them up a bit?

Sarah

Good history on the cathedral… is this about the cathedral itself or about the light show?

There’s an awful lot of ‘architect’ shots and maybe just too many pictures of the cathedral?

Great, great interview! That’s really cool!

Could you get a picture of him?