In Class Critiques

Katie:

Great colorful pictures, interesting narrative

Slow down some of the pictures, match some of narratives to pictures more, filter sound so its clearer

Patrice:

Great soundtrack, cool videos of water!

Make narrative louder than sountrack-hard to hear, provide more background on fountains, pictures a bit fuzzy

Colleen:

Great music, pictures, transitions are smooth

Make narrative louder, perhaps pictures of the artists would add to the movie, need more of a variety of pictures

Julie:

Cool transitions, great pictures that show the actual process

Fix sound problem, end movie, a bit too many transition effects

Ariel:

Awesome pictures, interesting facts on history of tattoes

pictures are a bit fast-slow down, add transitions, focus on pittsburgh

Emily

Great titles and transitions

make audio more clear, pictures are kind of hard to read, maybe include a sountrack throughout the piece instead of just at beginning and end

Gill:

Videos really add to the video, cool soundtrack, awesome music visualizer!

make sound louder-hard to hear, make clearer transitions, cut spaces are too far apart

Sarah:

great background info and history on the cathedral, awesome video of fireworks, great voiceover interview

make sound louder,add transitions, fix ending