MME loves and critiques

Patrice:
Good transitions and images!!---capture emotion of with music
1)Make soundtrack quieter
2) clearer images of reflections
3) try to get rid of gradation in photos
Colleen:
Great transitions and background/ images for your narration
1) Sound Levels—soundtrack down and narrations up
2) New Works gallery—images of the photographs, not just the gallery
3) try to get rid of gradation in photos
Julie:
Great shots, and transitions
1) Use text to label the different types of advertisements on buses
2) Work with different bus art/ads on buses out of Oakland
3) Fix video audio situation
Jenna:
Good images!!!
1) End with focal points on the doors, not windows
2) Subliminal messages/ images flashes? Look to take those still outs
3) Take out audio mess ups
Ariel:
AWESOME IMAGES!
1) focus on pgh tats>?? Maybe?
2) work on audio---obviously
3) shots of laura…maybe more flattering, not blank face…. Stylistic choice
Emily:
Good informative documentary progression, and good use of text
1) Work on audio reverb
2) lighting/ focus on chalk art
3) Maybe add more background music
Gill:
I really like how you interviewed people to see what music means/does for them and how you used visualizer of music you were playing
1) Turn up sound levels
2) Maybe put music in background of live music set ups
3) Fill up black screen spaces
Sarah:
Good how you used original photos and blueprints from the Cathedral
1) Maybe use more pictures of the cathedral today
2) turn audio up a bit, add background music
3) make an ending