Film Critiques by Patrice

1 Love and 3 Hates: My Critiques of Classmates' Videos

 

Katie:

1. GREAT colorful, interesting, intriguing photos

1. speaking much too fast

2. you have a bit too much information 

3. many of your photos don't correlate with information/narration

 

Colleen:

1. fabulous photos that connect the audience with the information you are conveying

1. as you know...make your audio louder...

2. ...make your music quieter

3. some of your photo transitions are too fast 

 

Julie:

1. you have very interesting and specific images presented along with great information and video

1. put your audio up

2. fancy transitions are unnecessary

3. some photos are unclear

 

Jenna:

1. great and interesting photos

1. photos move too fast

2. your talking is way too fast

3. too much door history at the beginning

 

Ariel:

1. your subject matter is so intriguing and entertaining

1. you need more of your own photos, that you've taken

2. not enough information present

3. too much unnecessary information at the beginning about tattoo history

 

Emily:

1. great background information, very thorough

1. audio is too noisy

2. photos are a bit repetitive

3. maybe take away some of the words/questions

 

Gill:

1. great creative ways of portraying music, esp. with its visual portrayal

1. your audio is much too quiet

2. get rid of the black boxes

3. some pictures are too blurry

 

Sarah:

1. great firework footage

1. audio too quiet

2. too much unneeded beginning Cathedral information

3. talk too fast