in class 17 comments on videos

Katie

Awesome range of pictures and use of diverse images

Speak slower

Slow down the effects/ time between the different murals

Maybe add subtitles to where the works are

Filter sound more

Patrice

Make your narration louder

Add some different transitions between the videos and pictures

Good use of video and pictures combined

Work on editing the video maybe make it clearer

Find some other fountain pictures maybe the point (are you trying to focus just on those two?)

Watch out for repeating images

Colleen

Add a title

Great choice of background music that fits the images

Make your voice louder

Great use of different photos and many images

Add credits

Julie

Add a title and who it is by

Try to fix the grain of the videos ( the purple part in the first video)

Great transitions

In the narration, watch the puffs of air that appear on the track

Add credits and fade into the music at the end

Jenna

Add a title

Work on fixing problems in the narrations

Slow down the narration

Add some music whether at the end, the beginning, or the under the narration

Nice variety of pictures

Ariel

Cool title and use of a wide range of pictures

Check the value/ make it louder

Add some transitions

Add your name to the title

maybe get a picture from South side tattoo of the outside of the door so you can read it

Gill

A title more time for the title

Turn up the narration

All the sounds needs to go up

Watch the grain of the images and the videos

Cool use of the music visualize I like the message at the end

Add some transitions between the music- fade in and fade out

Sarah

Add a title

Add background music

Good use of historical pictures

Maybe slow down the transitions

Slow down the narration

Good use of video

Add some transitions between the interview and the narration and make the volume the same between the interviewer and the interviewee