Katie
Great pictures
Slow down voice
Slower transitions
Filter more sound
Patrice
Voice should be higher than audio
Video importation is good
Make it flow a little easier
Possibly focus on more fountains?
Colleen
Voice is great
More pictures
Maybe incorporate videos
Transitions
Julie
Make voice higher
Great description of the process
Ik you know this but fix the video audio with your own
Music? – make a bit louder to hear
Jenna
Talk slower
Movement of pictures slower
Pictures are very nice
Work on voice incorporated into the project
Ariel
Fix your audio
Focus more on Pittsburgh
Great description and research
Focus more on the art of tattooing rather than the world
Emily
Articulate
Pictures are really well chosen
Music throughout audio?
Gillian
Voice needs to be louder
Music engraved?
Work on the space transitioning
Great video
Sarah
Audio louder
Good historical information
Use more new pictures
Ending a little abrupt
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