Video Essay Critiques

Katie
It was very polished and well organized.
It sounds like your voice is echoing a little bit.
Some pictures had nothing to do with what was being said.
Needs music.
Patrice
Music was great, but should have been lower than your voice.
Enunciate less.
Grainy pictures.
Coleen
Effects where great.
Music was louder than your voice.
Too much time about photography in general that should have been spent on silver eye itself.
Titles.
Julie
Great information.
Too many transition effects.
Jenna
Great definition of doors, helps to introduce door art.
Slow down.
Too much information outside of Pittsburgh.
Jumbled.
A lot of pauses.
Ariel
Poppie Yay!!!!!!
Focus on Pittsburgh.
Transitions.
Sound would be nice. lol
Emily
Nice music.
Muddy voice.
Some of the angles of the pictures made it hard to read the chalk art.
Slides too fast.
Jill
Cool psychedelic thing!!!
Louder.
Change videos more often.
All of the stills used the same effect, try some others.
Sarah
Nice blue prints and old pictures, they look hard to find.
Talk faster and less monotone.
Cut down interview time a little bit.