Sunday, November 23, 2008

Julie's Critiques

Katie
The information was very informative
The still clips went by too fast at the one part with the buses
Speak slower
Music in the background?

Patrice
The music went along really well
Keep the still images longer in the beginning
Lower the volume of the music and increase the voice soundtrack
The images turned out a little grainy

Colleen
The movement of your pictures was awesome
Increase your voice volume

Jenna
The pictures are well taken
Maybe take and keep a full shot of a door rather then moving up and down them all
Show more of the doors and could even keep them up longer if there aren’t enough

Ariel
The history and background was very informative
Check the copyrights of the photos you use
Show tattoos that are pitt focused
Increase volume

Emily
The addition of the text was a great idea
Fix your audio to try and make it clearer
Maybe give motion to the pictures
Music in the background?

Jill
Increase the volume of the audio
Video was a little shaky
Speed up transitions
Sharpen up pictures

Sarah
The video of the fireworks looked really great with the addition of the interview
Add music in the background
Pause more in between sentences
Figure out a conclusion

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